Thursday 29 September 2011

My First Blog:) "Being there"

Hi everyone!


This is my first blog, and I'm going to discuss my opinion about the effect of war on relationship.

  Ernest Hemingway, in his short story, clearly describes how war could affect on people's relationship. To begin with, i would say that this is a very nice but some kind of sad story because the end is not like i expected to be. Going back to the discussion theme, war is a huge tragedy that could happen in the world because it separates and postpones families, friends and close people from each other, it revives hostility between people, it loses all hope to be with loved ones. In this story, we see how it separates two people who love each other. But there is a question, if you love somebody will you cheat on them? In my opinion, if you do love someone, you will never do bad things and cheat on  your sweetheart because you will not be able to hurt his/her feelings that are mutual, it means if you don't respect your choice you don't respect your self. So, we can see and i can say that the love that they have it is not true and real. In conclusion, in man's case he doesn't really love her, maybe some of you will argue with me, but what does he prove by having an affair after he knows about Luz's affair? He proves nothing, he proves only that if you do something with a bad purpose, only you and no one else will be hurter more and will have much more troubles than the one you want to hurt. As all of us know, he has worse consequences than Luz. He has an incurable disease.

1 comment:

  1. Welcome, Assel; it's good to have you finally with us!

    I enjoyed reading this post, but I'd like to recommend that the picture and title be related to the content of the post. You might like to introduce yourself in this post, and then cut and paste the text to put in a separate post about "A Very Short Story." Also, please remember to identify the story you are commenting on by name with either italics or quotations. Finally, I should make one small vocabulary correction: "affair" is not applicable to what the man did because Luz had already ended their relationship. If they were still in a relationship, then it would have been an affair. In any case, we will look forward to reading more of your writing!

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